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Scream in my face and
Try to strip away my courage.
You should know that
That old trick is too worn out.

My walls won't break.
They were built for you.
You should know that
You can't hurt me agian.
i think he may have finally figured out that i won't break down anymore.
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LadyUnkindness Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I dedicate this poem to my dad.

You've really struck a chord with me on this one. Bravo indeed, my friend. Bravo.
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LadyxXxBug Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
Even though I have not heard from him in almost 5 months now, and even though I miss him so much, sometimes I wonder what would I do if he ever tries to reach me...and out of all the scenarios I play in mind, I always come down to one: Never let him in again...not at all. I hope I can remain strong and remember all the pain he's put me through, in case he ever tries to fix the bridge he broke long ago.
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Ulistreen Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why is it named "Try again"? Does not fit the contents of the poem all that good.
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mettlelark Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it's called try again because he keeps trying to get a reaction out of me even though it doesn't work anymore. It's called "Try Again" because it's sort of a taunt. (even though he won't read it)
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Ulistreen Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Now I understand it
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Lorine93 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
A very beautiful and strong poem. I love it! <3
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mettlelark Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks!
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Lorine93 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for writing something so amazing! :)
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